Improvement/Feeback Provided

Looking back at my comments and feedback given from other students, I was given some overall improvement to look upon. I was told that my lip sync was not fully in time with the visuals. Drawing form this I have commented on my blog post in which i have screenshot below, stating that I uploaded the practice version. I have now uploaded the correct version onto my blog which shows that my lip sync is mostly in time with the visuals. I was told that I could of put more of a personal touch to the process so that the video would have appeared to be more engaging for my audience to watch. From this I have taken their feedback on board so that when I come to create my own virtual music video I will know how to go about it in a more effective and professional manner.